heres the paragraph;
My family and I moved to a new a town and I was completely terrified! I had to attend a new school, make new friends- basically start over. I was as nervous as _______
What could i use in that line.
I don’t think you are going to get a one-word simile there.
I am thinking …
* as nervous as a midget in a football match
* as nervous as a fly in a spider’s web
or something along those lines. Or change the parsing all together.
“… basically start over. I wasn’t just nervous, I was a walking, talking embodiment of cold sweat.” or something like that. 🙂
The answers that first popped into my head probably can’t be posted here.
I was as nervous as a tax evader going to an appointment with the IRS.
I was as nervous as a mouse in a barn full of cats.
I was as nervous as a confirmed bachelor on his wedding day.
I was as nervous as a miniature Chihuahua
cat in a room full of
how about one of those dogs that shake all the time? ahaha
a hyperveltilating cat?